A few tips
You need more than the synth sounds...in this one a beat would fit great and a bit more bass
nice simple...if there was a arcade game about this song then this would be it.
And just for some people information it isn't confirmed that it's about spanking your weasel....it's just the bunch of people that say its officially true when it isn't....he did say that it was in an interview but guess what in the next interview he denied it so people over the internet chose the wanking story and told everyone that it's 100% true....it isn't confirmed....they might say the lyrics match it....no it matches the dirty thoughts inside peoples heads.
First of all, great work.
You're right it is pretty smooth unlike some other trances where it's very rough. This is very unique and i like the style of it. The trance matches with the piano very well and there is alot of changes throught the song yet keeping the melody the same (although changing it at some point may have made it better.) There's not really that much i can criticise about this piece, except maybe you could delay the piano melody so that the notes sound longer. I wonder how this would sound like slower =S.
Anyways overall great piece good work and hope you make more. =]
The thing is it wouldn't work as a loop but as an actual song and plus u didnt really loop it rite but good work on the sound and plz try to make it into a song. plz
ok since you want me to make it into a song i'll try my best
not bad...in fact I liked it =D
not bad music you shouldn't put yourself down its a good song. just wish the voice was louder it's a beautiful voice. no one really minds lyrics...atleast i think so....it sounds good make more and no the guitar isnt bad..good on ya mate
I appreciate, we literally lost a bet in the studio and had to make this track in less than 4 hours, and we did. You should definatly listen to the trance remix, Shenkhar did an amazing job on it. You can find it here, wwww.myspace.com/teamsix
Yeah I saw on the greek news as well it was sad....they lit up the mountains where there was only one road out and it was blocked so people went through the forest for a chance to escape and the ended up dying. Great song to fit thatgood variation nice sound good length and you didn't keep it the same throught the song you and making it repetative. good job. I can't really think of anything for you to improve on, but lread other reviews to see what they think.
dang i realise it's been a while since you wrote this review.
Not bad sounds pretty good good job with the techno and very fast but could of been better.
Long boring constructive criticism Review:
You did a fair job. The main tune was almost exactly the same as sonic (as in the tune not the way it sounds) could of changed it up a bit, but not too much that you can't recognise the song. The percussion bit could have been way better it was the same thing through out the song. Definitely needed a variation. You matched the bass to the song in the video game and made it sound a bit techno-ish but same with the main tune need a bit of variation if you play the exact thing from the game but just make it techno sounds kinda boring but anyways good effort hope you extend it
(I mean no offence to you in any way just telling you my thoughts to help you)
Thx for the review! You're right, it coulda been better...but if you read the description of the older and shorter version of this, I only did it bc I heard a really crappy version. ^_^v
I so need to see a tab for this. playing this is like playing god on guitar lol and it made it to sc guitar maniac and its pretty good good on ya and hopefully you will make more!!!
good work at remixing zelda tunes...lol your lucky I'm a big fan of zelda ...it's one of the reasons I'm giving you a high rating cause if i wasn't i would give around 6-7 for repeatitiveness (dont think its a word) but apart from that your work is great ur remixing it very well. Add a little more variety and it will be just right. good job ^-^ =P
dissapointed...wasnt really a beat its was just the same sounds repeated...boring reeaaally quickly...but good effort for trying don't get put down by anyone and keep trying to get better ^.^ practise makes perfect mate ;]
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